For this portfolio (60%), I’ve got B2 as my grade. Things that I did well:

• Good philosophy as a student, as I am a hard working and well disciplined student.
• My decisions on choosing colour and font styles were suitable to each other.
• For technical competence: I am certainly a capable photographer, as I able to work and direct with model.
• Professional and preparation: I would be in the A category.
• Design and development: good judgement.

Things I need to look out for in the future:

• I change my idea way too much.
• Explore the typography a bit more.
• Layout on content page can be better.
• Be careful of the focus.
• Shadow can be filled a bit more with reflector.
• Analytically imagination: can find a deeper meaning of colour black a bit more.

For this critical reflection (40%), I’ve got C1 as my grade. Things that I did well:

• Presentation: nice clean cover page
• Good structure.
• A lot paraphrasing.

Things I need to look out for in the future:

• Header and footer page number is needed.
• Grammar needs to improve, like tense.
• Spellings and words choices hinder the understanding. I need to be more of thoughtful on this a bit more.
• Language structure needs to improve. By follow pros, cons, why, theorist to back you up or argue against. If you see this again what would you do. etc.
• Use page number for Harvard.
• Avoid descriptive.
• Harvard should be in alphabetically order.
• Hand pick something that you can really analyse on.
• Gibbs reflective cycle would be really helpful.

In conclusion: my critical reflection is my biggest weakness. Therefore, I need to learn how to write analytically, and improve my grammar too.