For this portfolio (60%), I’ve got B2 as my grade. Things that I did well:
- Good philosophy as a student, as I am a hard working and well disciplined student.
- My decisions on choosing colour and font styles were suitable to each other.
- For technical competence: I am certainly a capable photographer, as I able to work and direct with model.
- Professional and preparation: I would be in the A category.
- Design and development: good judgement.
Things I need to look out for in the future:
- I change my idea way too much.
- Explore the typography a bit more.
- Layout on content page can be better.
- Be careful of the focus.
- Shadow can be filled a bit more with reflector.
- Analytically imagination: can find a deeper meaning of colour black a bit more.
For this critical reflection (40%), I’ve got C1 as my grade. Things that I did well:
- Presentation: nice clean cover page
- Good structure.
- A lot paraphrasing.
Things I need to look out for in the future:
- Header and footer page number is needed.
- Grammar needs to improve, like tense.
- Spellings and words choices hinder the understanding. I need to be more of thoughtful on this a bit more.
- Language structure needs to improve. By follow pros, cons, why, theorist to back you up or argue against. If you see this again what would you do. etc.
- Use page number for Harvard.
- Avoid descriptive.
- Harvard should be in alphabetically order.
- Hand pick something that you can really analyse on.
- Gibbs reflective cycle would be really helpful.
In conclusion: my critical reflection is my biggest weakness. Therefore, I need to learn how to write analytically, and improve my grammar too.
